"Tiffany,
Impressive work on your Molotow commercial project submission for your commercial...one of the most creative and best shot of all those in this class! I loved the music, storytelling, and the great footage that you edited well, and your use of awesome actors too! You had great close-up shots of the product in a bag, the product in use, and the final product on the wall, all adding up to a great visual story to sell the product.

• Assignment Specifications (How well directions were followed). Followed perfectly
• Creativity (Quality of video footage; editing, audio production and concept). Exceptionally creative, good video shot and outstanding editing work.
• Problem solving (Evidence of critical thinking, conceptual development, and effort). Solid in every way.
• Presentation (Professionalism and craftsmanship; use of vocabulary, spelling, grammar, and organization). Perfectly professional, high level of craftsmanship.

Your video is excellent in virtually all categories. Maximum points possible!"


Video I | DFV120 P01
Professor: Phillip Oels
The Art Institute of Pittsburgh Online
September 2015